What do you guys think of my first chapter?! :D?

I like it. It is genious i like the way you describe the characters and everything. The only thing I reccomend is to add a sentence in the end kind of like this: I began whistling and glanced at the eggs, but looked away and day-dreamed about my mother.I remembered about that day once again, but stopped at the scream of Daniel. I faintly heard "Skyler! Turn it off! NOW! THE PICTURE IS BURNING! I did what he said as fast as i could but still got it burned. The one picture i had of my mother. When we were a happy family. When we were different .............